My final grade is C-ish due to it feeling its unfinished and also because of the troublesome bits. I also have an issue with romances that decide to make the character who is the competitor in the one character’s affections somehow a horrible person in order to make it okay that the main characters did whatever they did. This story might also have worked better if the characters were a little older. Perhaps if it was drawn out into a full novel we could have gotten more moments where we could see that Dylan is feeling it too outside him being a jerk to Bianca’s dates. Side characters are finding it so obvious but it doesn’t seem as obvious as we are supposed to believe. We are supposed to believe that Dylan and Bianca have been in love for awhile but Dylan has been in denial but its not really there in moments. I think my main problem with this one is that there was no build up in the novel. I believe the first novel felt the most complete, even if it was short and could have used some development. Its the longest of the three, but oddly enough not the best one. Like its two predecessors Truth or Dare and Kiss and Make Up, this is more of a novella then a novel at only 115 pages. I’m not sure if this is the final novel, or if Ms. This is the final released novel in the Bayfield series. Title: Perfectly Clueless (Book 3 in the Bayfield High Series)
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